Category: For Someone

Poetry written with someone in particular in mind.

  • Poem: In Her Eyes

    This piece was written in response to the 2004 tsunami.  I think I’ve explained this poem before, but since I’m going through all my work, I better go through this one as well.  I didn’t really have a particular person in mind, except for a small Indian girl.  In my mind’s eyes, she was standing amidst rubble and refuse that had been brought up by the floodwaters.  The look of sadness has permeated every part of her, but especially her face and her eyes.  The eyes of a child that young should never be sad, and she has experienced some of the deepest sadness in the world.  I don’t know if she lost someone who she loved, but more than likely she did.  If anything, she is torn apart by the sadness surrounding her.  Here’s the poem.

    January 18th, 2005

    In Response to December 24th, 2004

    My Child, why are your eyes
    So sad and low?
    The water flowed and washed
    All your joy away.Once deep and tranquil,
    Two drops of love
    In a sea of brown,
    Now murky and red.Where have all your tears gone?
    Back to the sea
    Inside your heart where they
    Stay behind the wall.Grow, my dear, to smile again
    And laugh with glee;
    Dance beside a gentle sea rocking
    Now calm and serene. – Sarah ><>

  • Poem: A Christmas Song

    December 5th, 2004

    My Savior as a baby
    I think on this tonight
    A child so filled with wonder
    A mother with delight

         How could it be
         This King of mine
    Would leave His lofty throne?
         And come to us
         And dwell with us
    His glory to be shown

    My rescue in a cradle
    Made soft by cloth and hay
    And sung to by the cattle
    A stable’s glad array

         What song to sing
         Oh Precious King
    The world awaits to hear
         A treasure now
         And all shall bow
    For glory has come near.

    by Sarah ><>

  • Poem: For Achilles; the Restless Warrior

    Well, one voice was enough to encourage me to keep going with this.  After watching the movie Troy, I was struck with the life presented by Achilles.  What I saw was a man who was lost…who was placing all of his faith in his own strength and abilities.  This kind of a life is empty, and by the end of the movie, he realized it, striving to put his hope into something bigger than himself…love, in this case.  But, it reminded me of the many people in this world who decide to rely on their own strength and not in something greater…the greatest thing being God Himself…their creator.  Yea, Achilles is a character in Greek mythology, but the only reason mythology has such a distinction is because it is based, to a point, on human life, and the dynamics of relationships and living.  The only reason the gods and supernatural are included is because man innately recognizes that there has to be a greater force out there beyond his own existence.  It’s misdirected, to be sure, but still, a demonstration that eternity is written on the hearts of man.

    The mechanics of this poem are based on the use of questions.  These questions reflect the uncertainty in Achilles’ life.

    November 15, 2004

    What kind of peace could I have?
    My life is spent at the edge of my sword
    Sweat on my brow
    Blood is mingled with their tears

    What is this that lies behind their eyes?
    A pleading that is wearing at my soul
    Is this man a father?
    Are his children left behind?

    Could I ever know this kind of love?
    They fight for glory and passion
    They believe in this
    Longing to have what brings them joy

    What could ever bring me joy?
    Will this sword and legend comfort me
    When my hair is gray
    Or when my head is heavy on my pillow?

    Why can’t I find my peace?
    It is clouded by the mist from the waves
    Should my feet drudge to find it,
    My soul shall find its rest.

     – Sarah ><>