This poem….I don’t know how to describe it. I was going to a real earthy kind of feel with it. The lines of repeating words are to feel like echoes…emphasizing the verbs in the previous lines. It’s from God’s perspective to us. I hope you like it:
My Son I Send You
May 31st, 2004
I’m calling for you
Calling, calling
Longing for you
Longing, longing
My love I send you
Sending, sending
Your heart, I’ll mend you
Mending, mending
I dread what ends you
Dreading, dreading
I’ll tread this for you
Treading, treading
My Son I send you
Sending, sending
My child, I love you
Loving, loving
– Sarah ><>
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